Wednesday, September 1, 2010

Proposal


1.     Sports, and the experiences and affects they have had on my life. I will focus on golf, basketball and lacrosse all of which I played in high school.
2.     a. I want to convey my experiences and lessons learned through organized sports leagues at the high school level.
b. I can contribute stories of seasons that I participated in sports and the
highs and lows of playing sports.
3.     Audience: a. My peers and athletes of any sport, as well as the student body. They can all learn lessons that cannot be learned without working with others in a team form or individual sports.
b. They know the ideas behind the sports, but not all of the behind the scenes action and work that goes into a full sporting season.
c. I will address the audience in a straight forward manner, and channel my most memorable and forgettable moments and the lessons they taught me off the field.
4.  I want to teach the audience about the work ethic and values that playing different sports can help people learn almost subconsciously.
5. My narrative will be in an informative fashion, but captivating the audience with moments of struggle and moments of excellence, from the practice field to in-game situations, this experience is relatable but unique to those who have not played serious sports.

6.  a. My constraints are that it is hard to show the character and stature of my coaches and include the emotion that makes sports so intense. I plan to appeal to the basic knowledge many non athletes have about sports and expand it.
b. I will use factual evidence, detail struggles and successes, and speak to the morals and character that can be built through playing sports.
7. Tentative thesis- Participating in sports on organized teams is a great way to learn difficult life lessons and strengthen character.


1 comment:

  1. Josh,

    Your memoir will need to focus on a specific event, likely one relating to a particularly time when you learned a difficult life lesson, as your thesis suggests you did. From there, your thesis will be come more specific. What is an example of a life lesson you learned playing sports, and what 'moment' or event led to that lesson?

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